Core Narrative 7

The Eden Architype

CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT:

All in

SHORT STORY SYNOPSIS/logline THAT INCLUDES A CLEAR BEGINNING, MIDDLE AND END (10 POINTS)

An alcoholic teacher living his mundane everyday life in the technological brilliance of Eden, teaching high school students. One day starts to notice abnormal things happening in his systematic life. The novel will depict the events of a shooting in the high school because of the search and extermination of a boy not from Eden. The gunmen are agents of Kronos disguised as people from the outside boarded in order to keep the Edenites in fear of the outside world and under control of Kronos

GENRE:

Thriller

PROTAGONIST (5 POINTS)

Ben

ANTAGONIST (5 POINTS)

Gunmen

MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/ DESCRIPTIONS (5 POINTS):

Sarah the math teacher and Bens crush. Elio boy from the outside boarder.

PRIMARY LOCATIONS WITH DESCRIPTIONS (3 POINTS):

Bens apartment. Broad description of Eden. High school

ADDITIVE COMPREHENSION (10 POINTS):

Origin Story — Historical Event

Origin Story — Character

Origin Story — Organization

Character Reveal

Anticipated Showdown

Story world Reveal

Other Micro-Story Reveal

Tells this missing parts of Elio’s story of how he got to the hospital.

TARGET MARKET (5 POINTS):

18- 40 Readers

THOROUGH DESCRIPTION OF THEIR MEDIA HABITS (5 POINTS):

People who like to sit and read for periods of time and absorbing information and visualizing in there mind

MEDIUM (REFER TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

Novel

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM (5 POINTS):

It works in this medium because all of Eden’s complexity can be explain by reading. The reader can imagine the technological advances being described. This is the all in section of the storyworld where all seems normal and accepted.

PLATFORM (REFER TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

Amazon. Hard copy. Electronic copies

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS PLATFORM (5 POINTS):

I want to give readers the option of how to read the novel.